revision summary
summary
Throughout this course a reoccurring problem that I have is not writing concise. Therefore, the majority of this revision was focus on writing concise. For example, previously in my draft(s) I wrote about the skills that I have, but I never wrote how I apply my skills, or included information that makes me different from other applicants, such as understanding how to work in a SCRUM environment. The minor changes are things like formatting, where instead of "To Whom this May Concern: " I address the person in charge. Also, because I couldn't find a way to apply my "profound" and "unique" skills, I ended up taking that out of the Cover Letter, because without an example, it's misleading information, and may catch up with me in an interview.